“Tops heel
and yaw,
Sent newly
spinning:
Squirm round
the floor
At the
beginning,
Then draw
gravely up
Like
candle-flames, till
They are
soundless, asleep,
Moving, yet
still.
So they run
on,
Until, with
a falter,
A flicker --
soon gone --
Their pace
starts to alter:
Heeling
again
As if
hopelessly tired
They wobble,
and then
The poise we
admired
Reels,
clatters and sprawls,
Pathetically
over,
--And what
most appals
Is that tiny first shiver,
That stumble, whereby
That stumble, whereby
We know
beyond doubt
They have
almost run out
And are
starting to die.”
Today, Kay
Ryan might write such a poem. Larkin wrote it on Oct. 22 and 24 in 1953,
published it in a magazine in 1957, and never reprinted it. In a 1956 letter to
Monica Jones he referred to it as “an old no-good one you haven’t seen called ‘Tops.’”
Archie Burnett in The Complete Poems
tells us Larkin originally titled the poem “You’re the tops,” presumably in reference
to Cole Porter’s clever 1934 song “You’re the Top.” The poem is a modest masterpiece.
On the literal level, Larkin has closely studied the behavior of a top in
action, which is the only way the metaphor could work. Readers of a certain age and temperament will experience a quaver of recognition: “--And what most appals / Is that tiny
first shiver.”
[Go here to view the video of "Tops," produced by Charles and Ray Eames in 1969, mentioned by a reader in one of the comments below. The music is by Elmer Bernstein.]
[Go here to view the video of "Tops," produced by Charles and Ray Eames in 1969, mentioned by a reader in one of the comments below. The music is by Elmer Bernstein.]
What an anthology you could make out of poems authors went sour on and refused to have reprinted.
ReplyDeleteThe design team of Charles and Ray Eames made many short films, the most famous probably "Toccata for Toy Trains" and "Powers of Ten." In 1969 they brought out a little essay called "Tops," just seven minutes long, which observes children playing with tops -- and the tops themselves, in their dance: practically a perfect counterpart of Larkin's words.
ReplyDeleteIt's on CD in the "Films of Charles & Ray Eames" set (Image Entertainment), and on youtube, of course (or was).