“In burnt
October, brown, in the fourteenth day,
Beyond the
fields in the wash of river wind,
The trees,
deeper green, yellower and redder,
Cool and
sweeten Ohio’s villages with leaves,
And apples ripe
in the orchards and trellised grapes,
Late bees in
buckwheat drone and the world is rust.
The sky is
transparent after rain. Now from the field
Father comes
at the daughter’s call. Come to the entry
Mother, to
the front door, come. Come.
Under
parting smoke, quiet with fear, Jackson
To his
captains said, Give them then the bayonet.”
It is perhaps
Davenport’s least-read book, a collector’s item in the original Jargon Society
edition, and far too beholden to Pound and Zukofsky. But there are passages I
love, and the poem is dedicated to Charles Ives and seems suffused with his
old-fashioned Americanness. Eighteen stanzas later, Davenport writes:
“Beyond the
virgin blossom, motherleaf, amber berry,
Leaf
transmutes to flame; October Chocorua
In the land
of maple, burning rampart in mist.”
William
James had a summer home in Chocorua, in the White Mountains of New Hampshire,
and died there in 1910. Davenport’s lines bring to mind the philosopher’s
brother, Henry James, in a passage from “New England: An Autumn Impression,”
the first chapter in The American Scene (1907).
James’ metaphor is recognizably Jamesian; that is, social and familial. If it
weren’t so witty and right, we might almost suspect parody. It’s never prudent
to underestimate the James’ sense of the comic:
“. . . the way the colour begins in those days
to be dabbed, the way, here and there, for a start, a solitary maple on a
woodside flames in single scarlet, recalls nothing so much as the daughter of a
noble house dressed for a fancy-ball, with the whole family gathered round to
admire her before she goes.”
There is certainly an unusual amount of similarity between Davenport's and Whitman's poem. I suppose that was the object, to awaken recognition. It certainly did so. I was surprised.
ReplyDeleteThe fourth section, “Fire, October, Eyes,” of Guy Davenport’s book-length poem _ Flowers and Leaves _ (1966):
“In burnt October, brown, in the fourteenth day,
Beyond the fields in the wash of river wind,
The trees, deeper green, yellower and redder,
Cool and sweeten Ohio’s villages with leaves,
And apples ripe in the orchards and trellised grapes,
Late bees in buckwheat drone and the world is rust.
The sky is transparent after rain. Now from the field
Father comes at the daughter’s call. Come to the entry
Mother, to the front door, come. Come.
Under parting smoke, quiet with fear, Jackson
To his captains said, Give them then the bayonet.”
The beginning of Walt Whitman's poem "Come up from the Fields Father":
"Come up from the fields father, here's a letter from our Pete,
And come to the front door mother, here's a letter from thy dear son.
"Lo, 'tis autumn,
Lo, where the trees, deeper green, yellower and redder,
Cool and sweeten Ohio's villages with leaves fluttering in the moderate wind,
Where apples ripe in the orchards hang and grapes on the trellis'd vines,
(Smell you the smell of the grapes on the vines?
Smell you the buckwheat where the bees were lately buzzing?)
"Above all, lo, the sky so calm, so transparent after the rain, and with wondrous clouds,
Below too, all calm, all vital and beautiful, and the farm prospers well.
"Down in the fields all prospers well,
But now from the fields come father, come at the daughter's call.
And come to the entry mother, to the front door come right away.
"Fast as she can she hurries, something ominous, her steps trembling,
She does not tarry to smooth her hair nor adjust her cap.
. . . ."
Thanks for sharing the selection from Davenport; I was totally unfamiliar with it. And best wishes. I have enjoyed your blog for years.