“Sometimes the what takes over so much that the how disappears. I think poetry works best when these are indistinguishable, when they keep such good balance that you don't feel you're being preached to or grasping at the abstract.”
Back in the early 1990s I
had a chance to meet Robert Creeley. A friend was a graduate student in English,
and he and his doctoral adviser were meeting the poet for coffee. I was invited
but I couldn’t come up with a good reason to meet Creeley. “Celebrities” had lost
their attraction years before. As a reporter I occasionally had to interview a
writer whose work didn’t interest me. I knew how to enter that professional
mode, but why waste my time and his? Creeley’s poems had always seemed
anorexic, pale and underfed, barely holding on to life – scrawnier versions of
William Carlos Williams’ poems. In a word, boring.
The passage quoted at the
top is spoken by the Dominican-born American poet Rhina P. Espaillat in a 2015 interview. She identifies precisely the reason so much contemporary poetry is
unreadably dull. The what dominates, as in strident adolescent diary
entries – or poems. The how gets ignored into non-existence. Creeley’s
lines are instantly forgettable. They don’t register as they grasp at the
abstract. Contrast his work with “Workshop,”
a poem by Espaillat:
“‘Where have you been,’
says my old friend the poet,
‘and what have you been
doing?’ The question
weighs and measures me
like an unpaid bill,
hangs in the air, waiting
for some remittance.
“Well, I’ve been coring
apples, layering them
in raisins and brown
sugar; I’ve been finding
what's always lost,
mending and brushing,
pruning houseplants,
remembering birthdays.
“The wisdom of others
thunders past me
like sonic booming; what I
know of the world
fits easily in the palm of
one hand
and lies quietly there,
like a child’s cheek.
“Spoon-fed to me each
evening, history
puts on my children’s
faces, because they
are the one alphabet all
of me reads.
I’ve been setting the
table for the dead,
“rehearsing the absence of
the living,
seasoning age with names
for the unborn.
I’ve been putting a life
together, like
supper, like a poem, with
what I have.”
Plenty of content there --
“history / puts on my children’s faces” – accompanied by plenty of how.
Is it a “domestic” poem, an account of caring for family? The most important of
jobs. “I’ve been setting the table for the dead.” Espaillat continues in her
interview:
“Many poets today have
been confused into believing that adherence to forms is for minor works.
William Carlos Williams ‘blessed’ us with that idea: that if you’re really a
grown-up poet you throw out the sonnets. I think he did us a great disservice.”
Thank you for introducing Espaillat. She sounds wonderful.
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