A sheet of
light that paves
The palaces
of sight, and brings again
The river
shining through the field of graves.”
Auden, you
say? No, Larkin, though Auden haunts the
poem. Larkin had mostly shrugged off Yeats but Auden’s influence persisted. “Many Famous Feet Have Trod” was completed on this date, Oct. 15, in 1946, and (wisely)
not published during Larkin’s lifetime. Read out of context, the passage above
from the second of the poem’s thirteen eight-line stanzas sounds almost
ecstatic – psychedelic? visionary? -- by Larkin’s customary standards. In Philip Larkin: Life, Art and Love
(2014), James Booth likens the poem to the rhetoric in Fitzgerald’s Rubáiyát of Omar Khayyám.
And that’s
the problem with much of Larkin’s early work (he was twenty-four) and the work
of many young poets, even great ones. They assemble rhetoric. They write not
poems but poetic gestures. Individual lines and phrases may be memorable but
the whole does not cohere. Larkin’s poem is uncharacteristically long,
suggesting that he had difficulty keeping it in focus. The best of his mature
work is tight, without flab or filler. Nothing can be added or removed without
hobbling the whole. The fourth stanza begins memorably: “Turn out your pockets
on the tablecloth; / Consider what we know.” The rest turns overly schematic,
as though Larkin didn’t trust his own material. In his notes to the Complete Poems (2012), Archie Burnett quotes
a letter Larkin wrote to his friend James Ballard Sutton one day after
completing the poem:
“The
attitude is that sorrow is personal & temporal, joy impersonal &
eternal; but I have mainly wasted my time in arguing in verse that the whole of
knowledge can be divided so . . . . What I feel is that death can ballock life.
It does. But life can ballock death by means of sex (creating new life) or
(less certainly) art. BUT it has no consolation (I imagine when the
Reaper is knocking on your door).”
Stated so
baldly, Larkin makes his poem and commentary sound adolescent. In “Many Famous
Feet Have Trod,” he hasn’t yet learned how to suggest rather than intone emphatically.
Within a few years he would give us “Church Going,” “I Remember, I Remember”
and “Mr Bleaney.”
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