“It is not easy to write essays like Montaigne, nor Maxims in the manner of the Duke de la Rochefoucault.”
Who could think otherwise?
The two Frenchmen are masters of diametrically opposed forms. In Montaigne’s
hands, an essay can afford to be expansive. In fact, expansiveness – which is not
the same as lengthiness -- is a quality shared by many of the best essays, the
ones that linger in the reader’s mind and grow more enriching with time. (Consider
Guy Davenport’s “Finding” and Michael Oakeshott’s "On Being Conservative.") The
next word or thought ought to come as a mild surprise but not a shock. That
would be tacky. Good essays are unified only by the writer’s sensibility. No other
form is so personal. It is a reflection of the essayist’s consciousness, but
never an undammed stream of consciousness or gush. Montaigne often renders the
uncanny sense that we are reading our autobiography.
A maxime or
aphorism is written as tightly as a good poem. It is a nugget of moral good
sense and not a syllable is squandered. Often it contains a verbal IED. It goes
off unexpectedly and carries a sting. François de La Rochefoucauld (1613-80) is
the master of the form. His genius was to make the unpleasant truth about human
nature, our devotion to self-protection and self-regard at any cost, sound so
familiar: “Yes, that’s me,” we say as we read his maxims, even as we
congratulate ourselves on our splendid insight. There’s no escaping La
Rochefoucauld’s moral x-ray. Here’s one of his best- known maxims, first in
French then in the Oxford translation (2008) by E.H. and A.M. Blackmore, and
Francine Giguère:
“Nous avons tous assez
de force pour supporter les maux d’autrui.”
“We all have enough
strength to bear the troubles of other people.”
Virtue-signaling and self-congratulation
unmasked in eleven (or twelve) words. La Rochefoucauld pared the truth to its
unflattering essence. Implicit in the best aphorisms is not just the truth but
a slap on our face for failing to recognize it. The observation quoted at the
top was written by William Hazlitt and included in his Characteristics: In
the Manner of Rochefoucault’s Maxims (1823). The English essayist says: “I
was so struck with the force and beauty of the style and matter, that I felt an
earnest ambition to embody some occasional thoughts of my own in the same form.”
Hazlitt doesn’t have the
focused killer instinct of La Rochefoucauld. Nor does he distill his words the
way the Frenchman does. Some of his purported maxims are paragraphs’ long and
tend to be expository. A good maxim doesn’t explain. It demonstrates – a quality
Hazlitt often fails to deliver. Take this from Characteristics:
“A selfish feeling
requires less moral capacity than a benevolent one: a selfish expression
requires less intellectual capacity to execute it than a benevolent one; for in
expression, and all that relates to it, the intellectual is the reflection of
the moral. Raphael’s figures are sustained by ideas: Hogarth’s are distorted by
mechanical habits and instincts. . . .”
And so on, for another 230 words. That’s not an aphorism but an embryonic essay, which suggests the obvious: Hazlitt is an essayist, as surely as Montaigne. He needs several thousand words for his prose to blossom. He is perhaps the Frenchman’s truest, most accomplished descendant. Here his maxim almost succeeds: “The confession of our failings is a thankless office. It savours less of sincerity or modesty than of ostentation. It seems as if we thought our weaknesses as good as other people’s virtues.” Provocatively true but too long, too blunted. One sentence is usually best. Two will work when the spring is wound sufficiently tight. Let’s praise Hazlitt for his virtues, as in "On Reading Old Books," in which he renders a nuanced judgment both literary and moral in vivid prose:
“I have more confidence in
the dead than the living. Contemporary writers may generally be divided into
two classes – one’s friends or one’s foes. Of the first we are compelled to
think too well, and of the last we are disposed to think to ill, to receive
much genuine pleasure from the perusal, or to judge fairly of the merits of
either. One candidate for literary fame, who happens to be of our acquaintance,
writes finely, and like a man of genius; but unfortunately has a foolish face,
which spoils a delicate passage:---another inspires us with the highest respect
for his personal talents and character, but does not quite come up to our expectations
in print. All these contradictions and petty details interrupt the calm current
of our reflections. If you want to know what any of the authors were who lived
before our time, and are still objects of anxious inquiry, you have only to
look into their works. But the dust and smoke and noise of modern literature
have nothing in common with the pure, silent air of immortality.”
Hazlitt was born on this date, April 10, in 1778, and died in 1830 at age fifty-two.
1 comment:
I am reminded of the late great Steve Goodman’s song Somebody Else’s Troubles. https://genius.com/Steve-goodman-somebody-elses-troubles-lyrics (Is a good song an essay?) https://youtu.be/eEQS6kFbCOA?si=fArTPGgg_n2OflVd
There was a folk club by that name in Chicago 30 years ago…
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