Monday, August 31, 2026

'How Very Like a Red, Red Rose'

The stuff starts as white powder at the bottom of a one-gallon plastic jug. Add lukewarm water to the line, shake vigorously. Add a thoughtfully included “flavor packet” – lemon-lime, my favorite – to make it “palatable.” Chill. Drink eight ounces every fifteen minutes until the jug is empty. The label calls it “Gavilyte-G Solution 4000ML.” Catchy. Included on the list of possible side effects:

“Very bad headache. Throwing up blood or throw up that looks like coffee grounds. Black, tarry [!], or bloody stools. Bleeding from rectum or rectal pain. This drug may cause you to be dehydrated or have electrolyte problems. Rarely, this may be severe or deadly.”

 

And I volunteered for this. The label says, “No REFILLS.” Barbara Loots in “Colonoscopy: A Love Poem” (Windshift, Kelsay Books, 2018) finds something to celebrate in this most humbling of medical procedures. With apologies to Robert Burns:

 

“My love is like a red, red rose.

I know because I’ve seen

the photographs inside of him

projected on a screen:

 

“the petal-like appearance of

his proximal transverse,

his mid-ascending colon

like a rose’s opening purse,

 

“appendiceal orifice,

a bud not yet unfurled —

Oh, what a pleasing garden is

my true love’s inner world!

 

“How very like a red, red rose

his clean and healthy gut.

I love my laddie all the more

since looking up his butt.”

2 comments:

Thomas Parker said...

I'm surprised that the possible side-effects don't include suicidal thoughts, which seem to me almost inevitable, especially if you forget the flavor packet.

Tim Guirl said...

My colonoscopist used the 2025 recommendations which require half as much prep solution . With many colonoscopies under my belt, I found this one far less distasteful than rhe the previous ones . Good luck!