In 1995, R.L. Barth published the chapbook Samuel Johnson: Selected Latin Poems Translated by Various Hands, with contributions by ten poets including Len Krisak who adapts Johnson’s “In Rivum a Mola Stoana Lichfieldiae diffuentem.” Krisak titles it “The River by the Mill of Stowe, In Lichfield, Where the Waters Flow”:
“The river wanders still,
and still as glass,
It passes through that
boyhood’s grassy meadow where
My little limbs, with
little skill, would flail the air
That settled on its pool.
And there, held fast,
“I heard my father’s voice
and learned to swim;
His words were soft and
clear beneath the bending limbs
Of willows casting
daylight shadows, hiding him
And me below the bright sun.
Darkness dimmed
The secret place that
father taught his son.
Now time has put an axe’s
edge to all the trees,
And shade no longer lies
there. Even distant eyes
Can see these naked waters
barely run
“Their undeflected course
beneath the air
Of Lichfield, making for
the sea. Protected once
By leaf and branch, their
channel moves them as it wants,
In openness, as if it did
not care.
‘Dear Nisus, friend, now
learn to do the same.
Ignore eternal age, with
all its speed that cuts
Us from without, or wears
us from within. Do what
You must, and heed the
current of your stream.”
In Samuel Johnson: The
Latin Poems (2005), the late editor and translator Niall Rudd renders the
title as “On the Stream at Stowe Mill, Lichfield,” referring to the city in
Staffordshire, about 110 miles northwest of London, where Johnson was born in
1709. Here is Rudd’s prose trot:
“The river, still glassy,
flows through the green meadows in which as a boy I so often bathed my young
limbs. Here I would vainly thrash my arms, which got nowhere with their
inexpert movements, while my father with his calm voice taught me to swim. The branches
made a hiding place, and an overhanging tree covered the hidden waters in
darkness even by day. Now the shadows of old have fallen victim to cruel axes;
and the bathing place lies exposed to distant eyes. The water, however,
unwearyingly continues on its course from year to year, and where it once
flowed unseen it now still flows, though in the open. You too, Nisus, continue
your daily course, indifferent to what swift time may bring in from the world
outside, and what it may wear away.”
Judging from Rudd’s version,
Johnson’s original is a fairly traditional meditation on memory, time’s
bittersweet passing and lost youth. Rudd’s prose effort is useful but dull. “Cruel
axes” seems overdone. The adjective is unnecessary. Preferable is Krisak’s “an
axe’s edge.” The late David Ferry titled his version of the poem “The Lesson” (Of
No Country I Know: New and Selected Poems and Translation, 1999):
“The stream still flows
through the meadow grass,
As clear as it was when I
used to go in swimming,
Not good at it at all,
while my father’s voice
Gently called out through
the light of the shadowy glade,
Trying to help me learn.
The branches hung down low
Over those waters made
secret by their shadows.
My arms flailed in a
childlike helpless way.
“And now the sharp blade
of the axe of time
Has utterly cut away that
tangle of shadows.
The naked waters are open
to the sky now
And the stream still flows
through the meadow grass.”
What Ferry writes is more
transformation than translation, and a first-rate English poem. He jettisons
“cruel axes” and replaces it with the superior “the sharp blade of the axe of
time.” He dispenses with the obligatory Virgilian allusion and reverses the
conventional duality of darkness and light. Here, the shadows are comforting,
an emblem of Edenic childhood; light exposes memories and leaves everything
vulnerable. Some form of “shadow” shows up three times.
But for “and,” Ferry’s
poem starts and concludes with the same sentence – appropriate in a poem about
the unending flow of a river, with the Heraclitean caveat that’s it’s not the
same river. We know from anecdotal evidence that Johnson was, in fact, a powerful
swimmer, and we know his father, Michael Johnson, had died in 1731, long before
his son wrote the Latin poem.
Dr. Johnson was born in Lichfield on this date, September 18, in 1709 and died in London in 1784 at age seventy-five.