“Nobody
heard him, the dead man,
But
still he lay moaning:
I
was much further out than you thought
And
not waving but drowning.
“Poor
chap, he always loved larking
And
now he’s dead
It
must have been too cold for him his heart gave way,
They
said.
“Oh,
no no no, it was too cold always
(Still
the dead one lay moaning)
I
was much too far out all my life
And
not waving but drowning.”
The
BBC quotes Pickstone as saying: “It's a very dark poem. The poem was one of
many sources for the painting. I've always been intrigued by Stevie Smith and
how she worked, and I had a sense of wanting to make something more joyous out
of the poem." But why? “Not Waving but Drowning” is Smith’s signature
poem. It distills her trademark mingling of the funereal and the funny. Smith
was a comic poet and novelist, but joy is seldom on her palette. Philip Larkin
called her “the authority of sadness,” but she also makes us laugh (as does
Larkin). When asked to explain why she writes poems and where they come from,
Smith said “pressure is the operative word”:
“…the
pressure of daily life; the pressure of having to earn one's living, possibly
at work that is not very congenial; the pressure of one's relations with other
people; the pressure of all the things one hears about or reads about in
philosophy, history and religion for instance, and agrees with or does not
agree with; the pressure of despair. And the pressure too of pleasures that
take one's breath away - colours, animals tearing about, birds fighting each
other to get the best bit of bacon rind. And the funniness of things too...”
Pickstone
misses all of this. Her painting is pleasant enough, though it looks rather
casual and incomplete, like a cartoon sketch. In the background is the drawing
Smith made to accompany her poem. Pickstone adds a canopy of willow fronds in
autumn, judging from their color. They resemble a shower curtain. In Smith’s drawing, the figure appears to be
smiling and certainly isn’t weeping, if that’s what Pickstone is suggesting
with her choice of willow. Her goal seems to be an easier-to-swallow version of Smith –
Smith-lite. If the prize accomplishes anything worthwhile, I hope it attracts
a few readers to Stevie Smith’s poems and novels (especially Novel on Yellow Paper). Smith was born
on this date, Sept. 20, in 1902, and died in 1971. Go here for her reading of
“Not Waving but Drowning.”
1 comment:
Awards serve to draw attention to works and their creators that I might not know. Some of them I find have merit, others not. I don't worry about the ones who don't; I am grateful for the ones who do. And now this painting prize has indirectly brought Stevie Smith into my ambit. That works pretty well for me.
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