“A poem
should, on the contrary, be conceived as having a movement of its own, an
autonomous movement, which should be rendered as purely and as impersonally as
possible. The reader has no more right to revise the rhythms in the interest of
what he considers an effective presentation than he has a right to revise any
other aspect of the language. The poem, once set in motion, should appear to
move of its own momentum.”
What sent me
back to Winters’ reading was a poem by Dick Davis, “Janet Lewis, Reading Her
Poems” (Devices and Desires, 1989):
“The tape begins.
A few pages are shuffled
Then her
voice is there -- old now, clear, unruffled,
Unassertive,
going again among
Words given
order when the heart was young:
The cadences
are like that vanished race
They would
evoke, leaving almost no trace
On the after
air; gentle, evasive,
To modest to
accuse or to forgive,
Declaring
simply this was here, and this,
Which is
gone now—the bright frail edifice
O summer
stripped in time’s storm.
But I share –
As the tape
plays – her sense of sunlit air,
Of glades
where uncoerced humanity
Knew wisdom
as a kind of courtesy.”
Lewis
(1899-1998) was married to Winters (1900-1968) for almost forty-two years. She
is a good poet but her more acute gift was for fiction. All five of her novels
are worth rereading and one of them, The Wife of Martin Guerre (1941),
ranks among the best American novels. Davis is right: “her sense of sunlit air,” perhaps
because of her long residence in California, is present everywhere in her
poems, as in this line from “Paho in Walpi” (Poems Old and New 1918-1978,
Swallow Press/Ohio University Press, 1981): “The sunlight pours unshaken
through the wind.”
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